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Chapter 4 - Unraveling the Deed

By noon on New Year’s Day, the small house in Duluth smelled of instant coffee and burnt toast. Toby was fast asleep on the pull-out sofa in the living room, wrapped in layers of quilts. Bernard sat at the Formica kitchen table, his phone propped up against a sugar bowl, scrolling through public property records on a sluggish laptop he hadn't updated in five years.

It didn't take long to find what he was looking for.

Hennepin County online records confirmed Toby’s suspicion with brutal clarity. The sprawling four-bedroom colonial in Minneapolis was registered entirely in the name of Gertrude Vance. Raymond Miller was nowhere on the title. Worse, the property had a massive second mortgage taken out six months prior—right around the time Raymond and Gertrude had announced their engagement and forced Toby into a strict regimen of chores and confinement.

Bernard rubbed his temples, a headache throbbing behind his eyes. Raymond hadn't found stability in Minneapolis. He had walked straight into a financial trap, trading his independence for the illusion of a middle-class lifestyle, and when the bills piled up, Toby had become the scapegoat for their mutual misery.

The screen of his phone lit up suddenly with an incoming call.

Raymond.

Bernard stared at the screen as it buzzed against the table. He let it ring out twice, watching the caller ID flash his son's name. On the third ring, he swiped answer and pressed the phone to his ear without saying a word.

“Dad?” Raymond’s voice sounded frantic, rough with a hangover and lingering panic. “What the hell were you thinking last night? Do you have any idea what kind of mess you’ve created?”

“I rescued my grandson from a house where he’s being abused,” Bernard said, his voice flat and dangerous.

“He wasn't abused! He was being punished for being disrespectful!” Raymond shouted back, though there was a frantic tremor in his tone that betrayed his bravado. “Gertrude is beside herself. She’s talking about calling the police for abduction. You can’t just drive off with a minor, Dad. You’re breaking the law.”

“Then call them, Raymond,” Bernard replied coldly. “Call the sheriff right now. Tell them you want to report your father for kidnapping your son after you left him freezing in a T-shirt on New Year's Eve. Let’s see how the county child protection services feel about your living arrangements.”

Silence stretched across the line for a long, agonizing moment. The only sound was Raymond’s ragged breathing.

“You don't understand,” Raymond finally whispered, his voice cracking, shedding the defensive anger entirely. “You don't know what she’ll do. She controls everything, Dad. The bank accounts, the house, the car loans. If I don't get Toby back by tonight and smooth things over, she’ll throw me out. I have six hundred dollars to my name. I can't start over again.”

“You already started over, Raymond,” Bernard said softly, looking out the kitchen window toward the gray expanse of Lake Superior. “You just chose the wrong master.”

“Bring him back,” Raymond pleaded, a desperate edge creeping into his voice. “Please. Just bring him back, and we’ll... we’ll figure something out.”

“No,” Bernard said. “He’s staying with me. And if you ever want to see your son again as anything more than a visitor, you’re going to get in your car right now, drive up here alone, and explain to me why you let a stranger treat your flesh and blood like an animal.”

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He didn't wait for an answer. He hit end, cutting the connection, and tossed the phone onto the table.

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