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Chapter 6 - The Mud and the Metal

The beam of the flashlight pinned us against the wet wooden fence like insects under a microscope.

“Got you,” the second man rasped, his boots crunching loudly over the gravel path as he advanced, a heavy metal pipe gleaming dully in his right hand.

Grandma didn’t flinch. While the man’s eyes were blinded by the glare of his own light, she reached deep into her leather purse with her left hand, pulled out a heavy silver-plated brass thermos she’d packed with scalding hot tea, and hurled it with terrifying precision straight into the center of the beam.

The thermos struck the flashlight with a sharp, metallic thunk, shattering the lens and plunging the yard back into absolute darkness, save for the ambient glow of the streetlamps filtering over the roof.

“Run, Daniel!” Grandma commanded, her voice cutting through the hiss of the rain.

I didn’t wait to see if the man recovered. I lunged forward, grabbing Grandma by the arm and dragging her through the narrow gap between the neighbor’s boxwood hedge and our garage wall. Mud sucked at our shoes, threatening to pull us down, but we tore through into the adjoining alley where the shadows offered a temporary shield.

Behind us, a furious shout echoed from the yard. “Over here! They’re heading toward the lane!”

We scrambled over a low brick retaining wall, dropping onto the paved surface of the secondary service road where my sedan was parked fifty yards away. My heart hammered against my ribs like a trapped bird, the adrenaline keeping the cold and exhaustion at bay.

We reached the car, breathless. I unlocked the doors with a frantic jab of the key fob, shoving Grandma into the passenger seat before sliding behind the wheel.

“Lock it,” she gasped, wiping rain from her forehead with a gloved hand.

I slammed my door, locked the doors, and jammed the key into the ignition. The engine sputtered once, choked by the damp air, then roared to life with a desperate whine. I threw the car into reverse, tires spinning wildly on the wet gravel before catching traction, and shot backward out of the lane just as the shadowy figure of the first man rounded the corner of the garage, lunging toward us with empty hands.

I shifted into drive, slammed my foot down on the gas, and we rocketed down Elmwood Terrace into the safety of the stormy night.

For three miles, neither of us spoke. The rhythmic sweep of the windshield wipers was the only sound inside the car, punctuated by the ragged sound of our breathing.

Finally, Grandma reached into her church coat, her hands trembling slightly as she pulled out a crumpled, damp piece of paper—the letter she had managed to snatch from the attic floorboard before the door burst open.

“Did you get it?” I asked, keeping my eyes glued to the slick road ahead.

“I got it,” she whispered, smoothing the paper against her knee. She clicked on the overhead vanity light, squinting through her reading glasses at the fading typewriter ink.

“What does it say?”

Grandma’s face went completely pale, the light washing out what little color remained in her cheeks.

“It’s not just about the house, Daniel,” she said, her voice dropping into a hollow, haunted register. “Your father didn't just steal my money. He used my name to secure a commercial development loan three years ago—using the Elmwood property as collateral for a project that went belly-up in downtown Chicago.”

My hands tightened on the steering wheel until my knuckles turned white. “A commercial loan? How much?”

She lowered the letter slowly, her eyes reflecting the red glow of a traffic light as we pulled up to an empty intersection.

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“Two point four million dollars,” she said. “And the default notice was mailed to this house yesterday.”

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