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Chapter 3 - The Weight of Gold

The wind whipped across the parade field, rustling the American flag above us, but the silence remained absolute. No one moved. No one breathed.

Brock stared at me, his chest heaving, his entire worldview shattering in real-time. The invincible commander, the golden boy of the Coronado base, had just learned he had assaulted the one person in the entire military who possessed the legal authority to dismantle his career with a single stroke of a pen.

“You... you’re an IG investigator?” Brock choked out, the words tasting like ash in his mouth. “That’s... that’s impossible. You don't carry a weapon. You don't wear a unit patch—”

“That is the entire point of an audit, Commander,” I replied smoothly, stepping down from the platform and walking right up to him. I didn't tower over him, but my posture was absolute, immovable. “You were too busy admiring your own ribbons and ensuring everyone in your orbit kissed your boots to notice the quiet ones. You assumed rank equaled immunity.”

Two military police officers, summoned silently via General Vance’s encrypted tactical radio, materialized from behind the reviewing stand. They moved with swift, mechanical precision, grabbing Brock by both arms and forcefully pinning his wrists behind his back.

“General, you can’t do this!” Brock thrashed against the MPs, his veneer of confident authority entirely vaporized into childish panic. “My uncle sits on the House Armed Services Committee! This is political retaliation! Let me go!”

General Vance didn't even dignify the outburst with a glance. He simply gave a sharp nod to the lead MP. “Escort the prisoner to the base brig. Confiscate his quarters, his personal electronics, and all communication logs. He is to be held in solitary isolation pending a military tribunal.”

“Yes, sir!” the MP barked.

As Brock was dragged backward down the asphalt, his boots scraping against the ground, his eyes locked onto mine one last time. There was no arrogance left in them. Only sheer, unadulterated terror.

When the heavy steel doors of the MP transport van slammed shut behind him, cutting off his muffled shouting, the entire parade field let out a collective, trembling exhale.

General Vance stepped down from the reviewing platform and walked over to where I stood. He looked at the faint red mark on my cheek where Brock’s ring had clipped my skin.

“You didn't have to take the hit, Captain,” Vance said quietly, his voice laced with genuine respect. “My security detail could have intercepted him before his hand ever reached your face.”

I reached up, touching the small abrasion with my fingertips, and shook my head.

“No, General,” I said softly. “If your guards had stopped him, he would have spent the rest of his life believing he was right—that he was just a powerful man temporarily inconvenienced by bureaucracy. Now, there is no doubt. He broke military law on a live recording in front of a thousand witnesses. His career isn't just ended. It’s incinerated.”

Vance offered a grim, approving smile. “Well, Captain Hayes. Now that the opening act is concluded... what are your orders for the rest of the nest?”

I turned my gaze back toward the silent rows of elite troops standing at attention across the sunlit tarmac.

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“We audit the rest of them,” I said.

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