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Chapter 2 - The Inspection

By Thursday afternoon, the legal machinery was moving faster than I had anticipated. Marcus had called in a discreet commercial broker he trusted, a woman named Diane who specialized in off-market luxury listings in our historic neighborhood. Because the property market in our zip code was intensely competitive, Diane suggested an immediate walk-through for a private cash buyer she already represented—an investor looking to flip or hold historical homes without the mess of public open houses.

I left my office early, telling Julian I had a dentist appointment. When I pulled into my driveway at 3:15 p.m., a sleek silver sedan was parked near the curb. Diane was waiting by the front steps, holding a leather portfolio.

"Clara," she greeted me with a tight, professional smile. "The buyer is inside with his associate. He's very interested, provided the structural inspection matches the disclosures."

"Let's get it over with," I said, unlocking the front door.

As we stepped into the foyer, the sound of television laughter drifted from the living room. Martha and Elena were sitting on my cream-colored linen sofa, a box of crackers open on the coffee table. They both froze as Diane and a sharp-suited man in his forties walked into the hallway.

Martha bolted upright, her face flushing a mottled red. "What is the meaning of this? Who are these people?"

Elena scrambled to her feet, dropping her phone onto the rug. "Clara? Are you showing the house? Why are people in our house?"

"It's my house," I said, my voice steady and completely devoid of the tremor they expected. I turned to Diane and the buyer. "Please, go ahead and look at the master bedroom upstairs. The original hardwood floors are all through there."

"Your house?" Martha shrieked, marching across the hardwood floor, her finger trembling as she pointed it at my chest. "You are married to my son! You think you can bring strangers into a family home behind his back? Julian! I am calling Julian right now!"

"Go ahead," I said, watching her pull her phone from her cardigan pocket with shaking fingers. "Call him."

The buyer and his associate tactfully slipped past us toward the stairs, unfazed by the domestic theater unfolding in the hallway. Martha punched speed dial, her eyes blazing with absolute outrage. She put it on speakerphone, desperate for validation, desperate for Julian to put me back in my place with a single sharp word.

It rang three times. Then Julian's voice came through, brisk and distracted. "Mom? I'm in the middle of a partner meeting. What's wrong?"

"Julian, get home right now!" Martha cried, tears of pure fury springing to her eyes. "Your wife has brought strange men into the house! She's showing the property! She's out of her mind!"

There was a long, dead silence on the line. The background noise of the law firm office vanished, replaced by the heavy sound of Julian shifting his weight.

"Clara?" Julian's voice dropped an octave, tight with sudden, creeping panic. "What is she talking about?"

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I stepped closer to the phone, looking straight into Martha's triumphant, terrified face.

"I told you we needed to talk tonight, Julian," I said clearly into the speaker. "The house is listed. The buyer is walking through right now."

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