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Chapter 1 - The Echo of the Front Door

The digital clock on my dashboard glared back at me: 2:28 PM. The westbound lanes of the expressway were a parking lot of gray sedans and semi-trucks, their brake lights bleeding together into a harsh, pulsing river of red. I slammed the heel of my hand against the steering wheel, the horn blaring a single, furious note that earned me a dirty look from the driver in the lane next to me.

Pick up, Derek. Pick up.

I had my phone propped on the air vent, the speaker crackling with the dead-air hiss of an open line. From two miles away, I was helpless. All I had was the sound of my brother’s breathing—steady, controlled, and laced with a quiet, lethal fury that I knew too well from the days we spent growing up in South Chicago.

“Derek,” I whispered into the void, my knuckles white against the wheel. “What do you see?”

Through the tinny speaker, a low metallic clatter rattled across the connection. It was the sound of Derek’s truck door slamming shut, followed by the crunch of gravel beneath his heavy work boots. Then, absolute silence.

“Derek?”

“I’m on the porch,” his voice came back, clipped and low. “Front door is unlocked. It’s wide open an inch.”

My stomach twisted into a violent, sickening knot. I could picture the living room—the blue rug Noah loved to play matchbox cars on, the small TV where cartoons usually played at full volume, and the silence. The terrifying, heavy silence that meant my four-year-old was either hiding or too hurt to make a sound.

“Go in,” I choked out, tears hot behind my eyelids. “Please, Derek. Go in.”

On the other end of the line, the heavy thud of wood hitting drywall echoed through the phone. Derek hadn’t bothered knocking. He had kicked the door wide open.

“Travis!” Derek’s voice roared from inside the house, the sound sharp enough to shatter glass. “Where the hell are you?”

For three seconds, nothing happened. Then came a frantic scramble of footsteps from the back hallway, a crash of overturned furniture, and the frantic, stammering voice of a man who suddenly realized he was out of his depth.

“Who the hell are you? Get out of my house—”

“Where’s my nephew?” Derek snarled.

The line erupted into chaos. A sickening thud of fists hitting flesh, a sharp crack of wood splintering, and then—cutting through the violent static—the small, terrified sob of a child.

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