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Chapter 10 - The Echo of a Shot

Time seemed to fracture into slow, agonizingly elongated frames.

I saw the white-knuckle grip on the steel grip of the gun. I saw the dark, empty circle of the barrel. I saw Elias’s hand flicking out of his coat with a speed that defied human logic—not drawing a pistol, but pulling a heavy, weighted steel crowbar from a tool cart beside the desk and hurling it across the concrete floor with lethal, spinning precision.

The heavy iron bar caught Raymond squarely across the wrist with a sickening crack of bone.

The revolver discharged prematurely, the bullet screaming past my ear and burying itself deep into a wooden shipping crate behind me with a loud, splintering thud.

Raymond screamed, dropping the shattered weapon as he clutched his broken wrist, collapsing backward onto the wet concrete floor in a heap of incoherent curses and ragged breaths.

The warehouse fell back into a heavy, suffocating silence, broken only by the steady drip of rainwater leaking through the corrugated roof.

Elias walked slowly forward, stepping over the fallen revolver, and stopped a few feet away from the groaning, writhing form of Raymond Vance. He didn't look down at him. Instead, he turned his slate-gray eyes back toward me, his expression completely unreadable.

"Well, Valerie," Elias said, his voice dropping into a low, conversational register that sent a shiver down my spine. "It appears your father-in-law has just made his final corporate contribution."

I stood frozen, my hands trembling slightly now that the adrenaline was beginning to ebb, staring down at the man who had terrorized my family for years, now broken on the floor at my feet.

My phone vibrated in my pocket once more.

I pulled it out with shaking fingers. It wasn't a text message this time. It was a live video alert from the security camera I had left running back at the hotel room.

The screen flickered to life.

The hotel room door was slowly being pushed open by an unfamiliar hand, and in the doorway stood a figure holding a heavy canvas duffel bag, looking directly into the camera lens with a cold, knowing smile.

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It wasn't Mitchell. It wasn't Brenda.

It was Tyler—Mitchell’s fugitive brother, just returned from Chicago.

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