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Chapter 2 - The General’s Daughter

The heavy wooden door of Colonel Brooks’s office closed with a soft, pneumatic hiss, shutting out the muted hum of the Fort Halbrook administrative wing.

Olivia stood at attention before the massive oak desk, her hands clasped neatly behind her back. Her uniform was clean now—she had taken ten minutes in the women’s barracks to change into a fresh set of BDUs—but the memory of the tile floor and the scattered food still burned behind her eyes.

Colonel Brooks sat behind the desk, not looking at a computer terminal or a personnel file, but staring intently at an unsealed manila envelope resting between his elbows.

"At ease, Private Bennett," Brooks said, rubbing the bridge of his nose.

Olivia relaxed her posture slightly, though her muscles remained coiled like steel springs. "Sir, with all respect... what did you mean out there in the mess hall?"

Brooks looked up, a dry, weary smile touching the corners of his mouth. He tapped the manila envelope. "It means, Olivia, that you are the worst undercover operative in the history of the United States Department of Defense."

Olivia’s breath caught. The room suddenly felt very small. "Sir?"

"General Arthur Bennett is my oldest friend from West Point," Brooks said smoothly, leaning back in his leather chair. "When he called me three months ago to tell me his youngest daughter was enlisting as an enlisted private instead of taking an officer's commission through ROTC, I thought he had lost his mind. When he asked me to keep an eye on you without treating you like royalty, I thought it was impossible."

"I asked him not to tell anyone," Olivia said defensively, her voice dropping its formal edge. "I didn't want a free pass. I didn't want people saluting my last name instead of my rank."

"And you got your wish," Brooks said, his tone softening into genuine paternal concern. "You wanted to see how the machine actually treats soldiers who don't have stars on their shoulders. Well, you found out, didn't you? You found out that when an enlisted soldier files a complaint against a connected NCO like Mercer, the paperwork doesn't just get lost—it gets shredded by the people protecting the old boys' club."

Olivia stared at the desk. "My first two complaints didn't just disappear. Someone inside S-1 pulled them."

"Not just S-1," Brooks corrected grimly. "Mercer’s uncle is Major General Vance, the deputy director of logistics at Pentagon command. Every time Mercer got into trouble, a quiet phone call from Washington made sure the incident report ended up in the incinerator."

A cold, heavy anger settled deep in Olivia’s chest. "So Mercer knew he was untouchable."

"He was untouchable," Brooks emphasized, leaning forward and tapping the desk. "Until today. Until you walked into the mess hall carrying a physical paper trail with a cryptographic timestamp that my administrative staff has already mirrored to an external server off-base. Mercer thought he was bullying a lonely private. He didn't realize he was triggering a federal chain of custody."

The intercom on Brooks’s desk buzzed sharply.

The colonel pressed the talk switch. "Brooks."

“Sir,” the voice of the battalion adjutant crackled through the speaker, sounding breathless and panicked. “You need to look at the secure fax machine in the comms room right now. We just received an encrypted directive straight from the Department of the Army Inspector General's office.”

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Brooks’s eyes widened slightly. He looked up at Olivia. "It’s starting."

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