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Chapter 2 - The Crimson Altar

The sterile white lights of San Gabriel Hospital were a welcome sanctuary after the suffocating, tequila-soaked atmosphere of the reception hall. By the time Daniel’s sedan slid into the emergency bay, my personal life felt like a distant, burning trash fire that I had finally managed to walk away from.

“Are you sure you shouldn't go home and rest?” Daniel asked, cutting the engine as we parked outside the ER entrance. He turned in his seat, looking at me with a mixture of professional respect and deep personal concern. “You’ve been on your feet since five this morning.”

“Rest is for people who haven't just had their entire existence detonated,” I replied, managing a tight, humorless smile. I reached for the door handle, then paused. “How is Valentina?”

“Sleeping,” Daniel said, his expression softening instantly at the mention of his daughter. “The nurses said her vitals stabilized an hour ago. You gave her back to me, Mariana. Whatever happens next in your life, remember that you are the reason my little girl gets to wake up tomorrow.”

The words hit me right behind the ribs, warming a space that had gone completely numb back at the Zapopan hall.

“Thank you, Daniel,” I whispered.

I pushed the door open and stepped out into the humid Zapopan air. But before I could cross the pavement toward the sliding automatic doors, a black Mercedes SUV roared into the ambulance lane, cutting off our path and slamming on its brakes with a shriek of burning rubber.

The driver’s door flew open.

Patricia Torres stepped out, her designer handbag clutched like a weapon, her face flushed with rage. Behind her, trailing awkwardly in his dress slacks with his tie loosened, was Alejandro.

“Mariana!” Patricia shrieked, marching directly toward me across the asphalt. “You absolute, ungrateful shrew! Causing a scene at the venue, turning your back on your obligations, and now running off with a patient's family member? Is this how a professional doctor behaves?”

I stopped dead in my tracks, my spine straightening instinctively. The woman who had sneered at me in the doorway of the reception hall—the woman who had engineered my replacement—was suddenly standing in front of me, shouting in a hospital parking lot.

Alejandro caught up, grabbing his mother’s arm. “Ma, stop. Please, just stop.”

“Don't tell me to stop, Alejandro!” Patricia snapped, shaking him off. She glared at me, her eyes venomous. “She embarrassed you in front of the entire Guadalajara elite! Half the board of directors from your father’s firm was at that wedding! And now she thinks she can just ghost us like a common thief!”

“I didn't steal anything, Patricia,” I said, my voice dropping into that calm, lethal register I reserved for uncooperative patients crashing on the operating table. “Except perhaps six years of my youth that I’ll never get back. Now step aside. I have patients to save. Unlike your son, some people actually have jobs that matter.”

Alejandro flinched, stepping forward. His amber eyes—the ones I had trusted for two years—looked desperate, hollow, and utterly pathetic.

“Mariana, listen to me,” Alejandro pleaded, his voice cracking. “Mom was right about one thing—you weren't there. You chose the hospital over us. You’ve been choosing the hospital over us for two years. Fernanda... Fernanda was there. She understood what it’s like to be put first.”

I stared at him. Really stared at him. The man I had lived with, cooked for, and planned a family with was standing in a hospital parking lot defending his infidelity by blaming my medical license.

“Enjoy your life with Fernanda, Alejandro,” I said softly. “You two deserve each other. Two parasites feeding off each other's mediocrity.”

Patricia let out a gasp of pure outrage and raised her hand, aiming a vicious slap straight across my cheek.

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Before her fingers could connect, a large, calloused hand shot out from behind me, catching Patricia’s wrist in an iron grip.

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