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Chapter 6 - The Hedge Maze Escape

The damp scent of trimmed boxwood rushed past my face as I tore through the dark labyrinth of Teresa’s estate hedge maze. Behind me, shouts erupted into the cool night air.

"Hey! Stop right there! Federal agent down—she’s running toward the western wall!"

Flashlight beams sliced through the twisting foliage, casting erratic, dancing bars of yellow light over the stone statues and gravel paths. My lungs burned with every breath, my heart hammering a furious rhythm against my ribs. I couldn't afford to look back. If the feds caught me now, I wouldn't just lose my freedom; I would lose Sofía, swallowed whole by a corrupt legal machine engineered to protect wealthy dynasties like the Moraleases and the Vances.

I hit the perimeter wall—a six-foot barrier of jagged old stone topped with wrought iron. Scrambling desperately, I dug my fingers into the damp mortar, hoisted myself up, and threw my legs over the top just as a pair of heavy boots crunched onto the gravel path below.

"There! On the wall!"

I dropped down hard on the outside of the estate, tumbling onto a grassy embankment just as a round of shouting faded behind me. Adrenaline hummed through my veins, masking the sharp scrape of gravel against my palms and the bruise forming on my knee.

I was out, but I was entirely alone, without a phone, without money, and running on borrowed time.

My mind raced back to the text message: Meet me at the Guadalajara cathedral in twenty minutes. Come alone. Don't trust the feds.

The cathedral was nearly three miles away. Walking was suicide; a public taxi or bus meant running the risk of being spotted on traffic cameras or reported by a driver. I needed transportation, and I needed it immediately.

Keeping low against the exterior fence line, I sprinted toward the adjacent side street where local residents parked their vehicles overnight. A row of quiet sedans lined the curb under the dim amber glow of a municipal streetlight. My eyes scanned the line until they landed on an older model sedan with a rear door that wasn't fully latched.

It was a long shot, but desperation left no room for hesitation. I yanked the rear door open, slid inside, and ducked down onto the floorboards, holding my breath as I searched the dark interior for an escape key or a dashboard release.

A second later, the front passenger door swung open. A pair of heavy work boots stepped inside, and an unfamiliar voice muttered curses in Spanish as the engine roared to life.

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My heart froze. I hadn't broken into an empty car; the owner had just returned.

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